1.Johnny, the zebra, was heading towards the waterhole.
2.Suddenly he saw a hungry crocodile looking straight at him.
3.He decided to go to the other water hole as it was to dangerous to face the crocodile.
4. He turned around and raced off as fast as he could. He was dismayed to find a hungry crocodile at the other waterhole as well!
Here is my story made from the comments.

THE ZEBRA
Once there was a striped zebra. He was a very busy zebra. He was always running around the veld chasing small animals. His name was Johnny. Johnny's mom was very thirsty one day, so she asked him to go with her to the waterhole. It was far away. And so he started his journey to the waterhole. He arrived at the waterhole with his mom. He saw a crocodile at the waterhole.
Johnny was afraid of the crocodile. So was his mom. She ran off. So he turned around as fast as he could and ran away. He knew there was another waterhole close by, so he and his mom walked to the other water hole and found another hungry crocodile at thatwaterhole. He didn't know what to do! His mom didn't know either. They were both very thirsty.
There was no other waterhole close by. They walked back home without any water. He and his mom were very sad. My story has a sad ending. A week later the hungry crocodile found them dead in their house.The crocodile had a nice meal.
Well done Koejag. It is a sad story! You put together a story very well from all your Zoomout comments. You have received your ZOOMOUT CREATOR badge http://bit.ly/2Adbcof
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