Early one morning two enemies decided to fight each other. They both wanted the same island in the sea. Whoever won the fight got the island.So they started to fight. Everyone was cheering for them.It was also very painful for the fat guy. He struggled to fight against the thin guy.
“Ouch!”said the fat guy.He got very angry and tried to hit the thin guy, but he missed.The thin guy punched him so hard that the fat one got a crack in his head. He fainted.The thin guy had won.
When the fat guy woke up again he was really angry. He wanted that island so badly. He got up and sneaked out to find the thing guy, He did a terrible thing - he killed the one that had won. Then he and his army chased the other army away. The thin guy's army ran to their boat to escape. The fat guy shouted: "Never come back here. If you do I shall kill all of you!"
Well, the army that had escaped were in their boat and on their way back to their own country. But then, a storm just arrived from nowhere.It was the worst storm ever. Their boat looked as though it was going to capsize. They decided to turn around and go back and face their enemies again.They had no option. They would have to try to concquer their enemies again.
A lookout guard saw them coming and shouted to everyone that the enemy was on its way back. It was too late. The enemy army landed and raced up to the palace. Every one was frightened. They hadn't expected this to happen. They ran away and jumped in their own boats. The enemy army had the island to themselves.
THE END
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